李校上周举办了以致创科技触碰未来为主题的科技节活动，请为校英文报写一篇报道内容，包括活动目的二活动内容三活动反响Aiming to spark our passion for technology, an activity themed 'Innovation and technology, touching the future' took place in our school last week.（段评：本段作为报道开头,点明了活动目的和主题,为全文奠定了良好基础。但存在两个小问题: 1. 标点错误:主题名称“致创科技触碰未来”应使用引号,且英文翻译的主题名称应加引号并调整格式。 2. 词汇选择:“spark”在表示“激发”时更常用搭配为“spark interest/passion”,此处用“arouse”更符合活动报道的正式语境。修改版：Last week,our school held a science and technology festival themed 'Innovation and Technology,Touching the Future'. Aiming to arouse our passion for technology,this activity provided students with a platform to explore the wonders of science.）
There were varieties (改：a variety) of wonderful activities, ranging from tech - lecture (改：tech lectures) to technology museum visiting. What impressed me most was the DIY Robot, which allows (改：allowed) me to explore technology on my own. Students had a good time with the creative time, fostered (改：fostering) our interest in AI robots.（段评：本段介绍了活动内容,列举了科技讲座和博物馆参观等活动,还突出了DIY机器人项目,内容丰富。但存在以下问题: 1. 冠词误用:“tech-lecture”前应加不定冠词“a”,且“tech-lecture”应改为复数形式“tech-lectures”以匹配“varieties of”。 2. 非谓语错误:“fostered our interest”应改为“fostering our interest”,构成现在分词短语作伴随状语。 3. 时态不一致:“allows”应改为“allowed”,与全文过去时态保持一致。修改版：There were various wonderful activities,ranging from tech-lectures to visits to the technology museum. What impressed me most was the DIY Robot project,which allowed us to explore technology on our own. Students had a great time during the creative sessions,fostering our interest in AI robots.）
The activity, which offered us a time to touch the future, was highly of (改：highly thought of) . Not only did it provide us with creativity (改：inspire our creativity) , but it also aroused our passion for technology.（段评：本段总结了活动反响,使用了倒装句“Not only...but also”增强了表达效果。但存在以下问题: 1. 介词搭配错误:“highly of”应改为“highly thought of”,这是固定搭配,表示“受到高度评价”。 2. 词不达意:“provide us with creativity”搭配不当,应改为“stimulate our creativity”,表示“激发创造力”。修改版：The activity,which offered us a glimpse into the future,was highly thought of by all participants. Not only did it stimulate our creativity,but it also deepened our passion for technology. Many students expressed their eagerness to participate in similar activities in the future.）
