Good morning, everyone! My name is Li Huong. I'm from China, but I live in UK (改：live in the UK) with my parents now. I'm 13 years old. I have many hobbies, I like swimming and playing football. And I have many habits, I always do morning exercises at 7:30 in the weekend (改：on the weekend) . I go to school with my dad's car. In junior high, I'm nervous now, but I want to make new friend (改：make new friends) with you too!（段评：这段作为自我介绍,内容丰富,涵盖了姓名、国籍、年龄、爱好和学习生活,符合记叙文开头的要求。主要问题有:1. 运行句:“I have many hobbies,I like swimming and playing football”是两个独立句子用逗号连接,应改为“I have many hobbies,and I like swimming and playing football”。2. 介词搭配错误:“in the weekend”应改为“on weekends”,“with my dad's car (改：in my dad's car) ”应改为“by my dad's car”或“in my dad's car”。3. 名词单复数错误:“make new friend”应改为“make new friends”。修改建议:在保持原意的基础上,修正语法错误,使用初中课标范围内的词汇和句式,使表达更流畅。修改版：Good morning,everyone! My name is Li Huong (改：Hong) . I'm from China,but I live in the UK with my parents now. I'm 13 years old. I have many hobbies,and I like swimming and playing football. I also have good habits:I always do morning exercises at 7:30 on weekends. I go to school in my dad's car. I feel a bit nervous about junior high school,but I really want to make new friends with you all!）