Being civilized is one of the base (改：basic) habits. It can show our manners. So, how to be a civilized student (改：civilized students) ?（段评：作为说明文的开头,这段点明了文明的重要性并自然引出问题,结构清晰！但有一处冠词使用错误:"one of the base habits"应改为"one of the basic habits","base"表示基础时常用"basic"。修改版：Being civilized is one of the basic habits. It can show our manners. So,how to be a civilized student?）
First, we should be honest. Telling a lie is not only bad to (改：bad for) ourselves but also to others. Next, we should care about people who are around us (改：around us) . This can touch them and make them feel very happy and surprised. Helping people in need is another good ways (改：good way) . This will make us get much achievement (改：sense of achievement) and confidence.（段评：这段列举了文明学生的具体行为,内容充实！但有两处表达问题: 1. 主谓不一致:"another good ways"应改为"another good way","another"后接单数名词。 2. 词不达意:"make them feel very happy and surprised"中"surprised"不符合语境,改为"warm"更贴切。 3. 表达优化:"get much achievement"改为"gain a sense of achievement"更符合英语表达习惯。修改版：First,we should be honest. Telling a lie is not only bad for ourselves but also for others. Next,we should care about people around us. This can touch them and make them feel very happy and warm. Helping people in need is another good way. This will make us gain a sense of achievement and confidence.）
We should be civilized in public too. For example, we can pick up the rubbish which we see. We should queue when we do some shopping or do other things. Don't leave the tap running is also a good method. These actions not only help us be civilized but also protect the envionment (改：environment) .（段评：这段从公共场合的文明行为展开,举例恰当！但有三处需要改进: 1. 祈使句结构错误:"Don't leave the tap running is also a good method"应改为"Not leaving the tap running is also a good method"或"It's also a good method not to leave the tap running"。 2. 拼写错误:"envionment"应改为"environment"。 3. 逻辑连接:添加"Additionally"使层次更清晰。修改版：We should be civilized in public too. For example,we can pick up the rubbish we see. We should queue when we do some shopping or other things. Additionally,not leaving the tap running is also a good method. These actions not only help us be civilized but also protect the environment.）
These ways that I suggest are useful. Let's become a civilized student!（段评：作为结尾,这段总结了建议并发出号召,简洁有力！没有明显错误,保持即可。修改版：These ways that I suggest are useful. Let's become a civilized student!）
